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The other standout is Denis Hennelly and Casey Suchan’s Rock The Bells, which, though first and foremost is a concert film, is also as nail-biting as any Hollywood disaster movie. It follows the fortunes of promoter Chang Weisberg as he struggles to reunite famously dysfunctional hip-hop nine piece the Wu-Tang Clan for a one-off festival. The group haven’t performed together since a disastrous tour supporting Rage Against The Machine in 1997, which they pulled out of after three weeks. What’s more, Wu members such as RZA, Method Man and the idiosyncratic Ol’ Dirty Bastard either developed successful solo careers, developing their own individual egos in the process (see RZA), or died (RIP ODB), so to assemble them on stage would be an extraordinary coup.