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your choice of words are always on point poetically and politically/socially. I noticed you’r cursing more on this and i’d suggest IF you choose to curse to scientifically PLACE it for the most effectivity. the beat isnt boring nor is it groundbreaking, it neither repels or compels. the cry style is interesting that you’re using…could be better utilized with subject matter thats specifically geared towards sadness and all that accompanies the feeling of crying. i give the entire piece a 6…it doesnt make me want to listen to it again but the energy is good.

thanks for the comments. Music is subjective. I think if you listen closely you will find that the subject is suicide and disconnecting from the world, I dont know what is more sad? It is what made Van Gogh chop off a ear. If you pay attention to the poetry piece by piece you may get the full picture. I only use curse words when they add specifically to the emotion I am pulling in. My vocabulary is vast enough whereas I dont feel the need to scatter it for lack of fills or subject matter. But you are free to disagree, that is the nature of the beast. Thanks for the listen. As for the production, that is also subjective, but I vouche for it. It was created by hand and built around the vocals, I could not ask for more.